November 14th, 2010, 6:30 pm

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Dc_Forever, December 2nd, 2010, 5:46 pm     Reply

REeally cool so far, jsut a couple of typos.

In the first block in the second panel, it should be, "They were used, at first, as a way" or if that sounds weird, just put at first in the beginning of the sentence.

In the third panel, "passed" should best past.

Sprry if you don't care about grammer n' spelling n' stuff. I figured I let you know.

I really love your style. It's really cool and no. We don't mind reading a lot:D.

Black-Snow, December 3rd, 2010, 12:05 am     Reply

Thank you! Ahaha I get lazy sometimes and don't check C:

I'll change that. Because I don't like bad grammer :<

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